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Venice, Italy
Prolog

     "No!!" The flash of light disappeared. Left in its place, was a small boy with short black hair. Growing from his back were a pair of leathery black wings.

     "Damn!!" the man exclaimed, staggering backwards. "This is not right at all!" In his frustration, the tall man in a white suit smashed a glass vial into the wall. The liquid that had occupied it vanished in a puff of smoke. "Why can't I get this right!?"
A voice from outside called for the man, and he grew frightened.

     "No... no one must know about this!" he whispered to himself. The man hurried, for the child was beginning to grow conscious. Its red eyes were dangerously close to being apprehensive of the man and the small, dark room. He took a necklace, with a carved black heart, and tied it around the child's neck. The man put a cloak over the boy's face, and opened the window.

     "I don't want to waste a life... be free little one," he released the small boy out onto the alley street from the basement window, and then proceeded to lock it. He composed himself, his features deceivingly handsome when not contorted with rage.

     Outside, the boy awoke and looked around, panicking. He ran frantically into the darkness, dragging his wings. From his place, he looked into the crowd on the street. He did not know who they were. He did not know why they stared at him. His mind was as blank as a clean sheet of paper.
©2008-2009 ~La-Oscura-Principe
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Author's Comments

My first installment of Malvagio! ^^ This is just the prolog, setting the stage for that little boy (my main character) and his mysterious creator. This takes place about 250 years ago in Venice, simply because I adore that city and the romance that lies within it.

I'll put more up soon, but I'm doing it in installments to give me time to catch up. (so far I have only 7 short chapters written, but I'm going to start writing a chapter a week I hope)
Comments and critiques are appreciated. ^^

Cover: [link]
Chapter 1: [link]

All the people in this story are my original characters, and the plot is also mine. If you see any of the same plot somewhere else, this is purely coincidental.

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:iconmbryn:
Hmm...I'm interested to see where this is going.

How old is this poor boy? An age qualifier in his introduction would be helpful. Something like, "A black-haired boy, aged about (twelve/seven/three?) years..."

Just a thought.

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"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.

"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
:iconla-oscura-principe:
you'r right, i thought i had put that in there, but i guess not... anyway, he's about 3 at this point.

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PONYO LOVES HAM!

Christine: "Where do you live?"
Erik: "... When you sing, I live in the heavens, and when you do not... down below."
~Charles Dance's Phantom of the Opera
:iconmbryn:
Oh, poor baby!

--
"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.

"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
Nice start. Awww, the little boy...
Cool pic to go with it. ^_^

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:

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